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In my opinion, Guangzhou is the most interesting place I would like to take my foreigh friend to see. Guangzhou is located in the south of China which is the largest city in Guangdong. It's a place where combinate with history and fashion. Guangzhou is the origin of the minority Yue and it's also the seminary of the culture of the south. There are many historical sites in this city. However, fashion is the secondary symbol of this city. Tower of the Guangzhou is one of the tallest tower in China. Moreover, some of the international company have estabished firms in Guangzhou, which enhances modernity. That's why I will take my foreign friend to Guangzhou. There is no doubt that it's the most interesting place in China.