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文章衔接手法恰当；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；高级词汇表达比较恰当，还要注意积累词汇量。
In my opinion, Guangzhou is the most interesting place I would like to take my foreign friend to see. Guangzhou is located in the south of China which is the largest city in Guangdong. It's a place which is combinating with history and fashion. Guangzhou is the origin of the minority Yue and it's also the seminary of the culture of the south. There are many historical sites in this city. However, fashion is the secondary symbol of this city. The Guangzhou Tower is one of the tallest tower in China. Moreover, some of the international company have established firms in Guangzhou, which enhances modernity. That's why I will take my foreign friend to Guangzhou. There is no doubt that it's the most interesting place in China.
