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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
The Internet In the era of information and technology, the Internet has played an important role in our society. With the Internet, it's easy to get the information we need, improving the efficiency of our study and work. We can't deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern society without the Internet. However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers. The teenagers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet.Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study. In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it. Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively,and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development. Nowadays Internet has become extremely popular with us which accounts for a aboil discus about whether it is useful to us.In this essay I will illustrate it. Of course,some think that Internet is of great help to us including the increasing rate of study and working.In this way,the complex job can be done by us easily with the help of the Internet.And we can acquire the first information in time to take the quick action to deal with problems.What's more,Internet is a convenient tool to make new friends.However,every coin has two sides,others think that Internet makes youth addicted to it so their study is badly influenced.Even worse,Internet may consume most of valuable time and at the same time there are many bilk activities on the Internet. In my opinion,Internet is a double-edged sword,only we use properly can it have a good influence on us.
