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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71640
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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In my opinion, Guangzhou is the most interesting place I would like to take my foreign friend to see. Guangzhou is located in the south of China which is the largest city in Guangdong. It's a place which is combining with history and fashion. Guangzhou is the origin of the minority Yue and it's also the seminary of the culture of the south. There are many historical sites in this city. However, fashion is the secondary symbol of this city. The Guangzhou Tower is one of the tallest tower in China. Moreover, some of the international company have established firms in Guangzhou, which enhances modernity. That's why I will take my foreign friend to Guangzhou. There is no doubt that it's the most marvelous place in China that I think my friend will love this city after visiting.

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