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文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章上下文衔接自然。
It is no doubt that Beijing is a beauitful and international city in China,which also have a pretty long history.There are many attractive and historical scenic spots,attracting thousands of vistors all over the world every year.Some one says that Beijing is the key of Chinese history,we can learn the history from the old architectures in Beijing.The typical buildings of
