2004年1月英语四级作文真题:关于专业报考

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；可适当增加高级词汇的使用量。

Apparently,as we all known,it is of importance for students to choose their profession.In my opinion,i really recommend the tour.there are some seasons.At the first place,it is general that people are fond of traveling with the rapid development of our country.Therefore,the tour become more and more important and popular.What's more,we can be aware of more things about differeent country by learning. As a matter of fact,if we are long to major in the tourism,it is must for us to realize some conditons about the tour.For instance,that is no doubt that it can been taken part in over 18 years old.Then,you are supposed to be caught up in traveling. Nevertheless,how to do some preparations.Firstly,on the one hand,we can not only know the basic information,but also have a deep impression on their customs.On the other hand,we spare no efforts to understand the tour condition of different country.