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I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Will you take a seat at the head of the table? It's an informal dinner, please don't stand on ceremony It's eight half now.I just read《war and peah》,my hreat is very moved.I like some people in the book."She","he",and more than people.But I only read part,I want to know their life,very much.I will read the book whole.