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若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
There are so many beautiful things in the world, but life is limited. Thus, it is important for us to make full use of the time and to make our life more meaningful. As the saying goes that the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. When it comes to the question," What will you do to make your life more meaningful?" Everyone have their own opinions. Some people think meaningful life means having freedem and a lot of money. As far as I'm concerned, First of all, We should try our best to help others that faceing the diffcult problems. In addition, we should better learn some forain language and reaveling abroad in order to broad our eyesight. Last but not at least, we must study hard and contribut to our motherland. In a world, if we want to have a meaningful life, we must set a goal and work or study hard to achieve the goal.
