小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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This is a photograph of Jim's family .Jim is on the left ,he is a student for a Chinese school,and he is a member of his school's basketball team，he likes playing baskeyball very much.His mother is on the right,she is a teacher,she has got a lot of students,she is a good teacher,so her son is good as well.The man next Jim is Jim's father,he is a very good basketball player,he has got lots of money because he is a famous player in China.