语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
With the increasingly rapid development of information technology and the incessant commercialization of modern society,it is obvious that technological skills and commercial knowledge have begun to play more and more influential role in human civilization,in recent decades.As a result of this striking vicissitude,there are less students chosing science subjects as their elementary courses or elective courses than before.This tendency is so eye-catching that numerous experts and academicians stand out to analyze its causes and possible effect upon our society.Personally thinking,this trend has intrigued by several complex reasons,and has induced multifaceted aftermaths. As for its source,the economic and commercial caprice undoubtedly take a significant part in propelling students to abandon science subjects.After the famous information revolution,technology,rather than pure science,seems to start to possess the crucial chair in optimizing our society.Consequently,the practical technology,which just needs the instruction of existing theory,has generated a prosperous industry where profitable careers and promising employment atrract uncounted adolescents to purchase their dreams.Indeed,in a democratic system and market economy,no matter where people were born,or what they did in the past,there is no wander that they will choose career-oriented subjects which can bring the splendid future. Moreover,there is no exaggeration that pure science,such as physics,advanced chemistry and organics,etc.,is truly more difficult than what other subjects involve.Actually,diverse profession offers a great variety of chances to students who want to avoid the subjects which are too abstruse.Students may be reluctant to waste time on doing research in laboratory,but intent to fulfill their personal destiny,to find their passion and to follow their heart.What is more,under the current educational system,a lot of scientific knowledge belonging to superior grades has been implanted into inferior lessons.For instance,some physical content which was taught in universities has to been also transported into high school,in order to cope with those difficult tests. About the phenomenon's effect,it is clear that everything has its pros and cons.On the one hand,astronomical students are liberated from the control of theoretical meditation and perfect hypothesis instructing research,thus making them free to search for their own field.However,on the other hand,less students selecting science subjects mean weaker force to nudge scientific research which ordinarily need many labors to manipulate equipment and analyze data.Unquestionably,in the future,if the phenomenon were to continue,the deficiency of researchers would be inevitable. Conclusively,on the basis of above ratiocination,the tendency has its root in economy and the idiosyncracy of subjects themselves.Similarily,it also has benefits and shortcomings in society and civil progress.In parenthesis,the government and parliament can take action and erect policies to avoid negative effects,through optimal distribution of financial support and optimization of convenience facilities.
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