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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9020
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇作者在句法层面做的很棒。

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There are so many beautiful things in the world, but life is limited. Thus, it is important for us to make full use of the time and to make our life more meaningful. As the saying goes that the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. When it comes to the question" What will you do to make your life more meaningful?" people vary in their opinions and everyone has his own interpretation of the meaningful life. Some people think that a meaningful life means that there are plenty of money and lots of freedom. As far as I'm concerned, first of all, we should try our best to help people in trouble, such as helping children in remote mountainous areas, as well as people with disabilities. In addition, we should better learn some foreign languages and traveling abroad or studying abroad in order to broaden our horizons and enrich our lives. Last but not at least, we must study hard and improve our ability to contribute our effort to the society. In general, in order to have a meaningful life, we should set a goal and work or study hard to achieve the goal.

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