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"Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and housepainting."
题目讲解：
本题要求从题目中找出主要的逻辑错误，也就是Argument题目的提纲，同时每一个逻辑错误准备一套语言套路去反驳。
七年前，附近的Brookville社区的业主实施了一系列关于该社区的庭院应如何布置以及房屋应涂何种颜色的规定。从那以后，Brookville的地产平均价格翻了三番。为使Deerhaven Acres的地产升值，我们也应该对于景观和房屋涂色实施自己的规定。
观点提示：
1.作者没有提供证据说明产地价格升三倍一定是改变外观的结果，可能是别的措施
2.没有信息表明Deerhaven Acres和Brookville是可以比较的，未必需要restrictions。
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；采用了一些简单的从句。
it does not prove a casual relationship in the paragraph above. average property value tripled in brookville after the community had been landscaped and the exterior of the houses changed colors is indeed the fact. but what if it is only a coincidence? there are many reasons for the raise of the average property value in brookville community. the price of the land might had get higher at that time. newly built infrastructure may also led to the raise of the value. and there may be new blocks of building built arround the brookville community and the scale effect led to the result. after all , there may be a real estate rivival at that time. otherwise, if there was a casual relationship in this case, we also have to consider carefully before learn to do the same thing. because it's seven years ago, things are changing and the conditions are different.
