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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

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要求：: Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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What is more meaningful in our life which is the topic would be taken on our daily life.I hold a view about that there are never appear the same leave and eveyone has diffierent oppions .As far as I am concerned,the greatest meaningful in my life is doing something made myself enjoy. I like to comunicate with my friends and we are exchanging our view which make myself expand my eyesight.Every moment I talking with my friend I will extremely happy.Perhaps this,I also enjoy watching movie at home,a quien place,which I will

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