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Happiness is the most important thing to people.But life is not the same as opera show that someone always be faced to variety problem.It is worst that problem usually make us upset."How to be happy in our life?"is the highestly topic be talked about. When I was young,a simple girl,who always hope everyone like me.So I has cared of other‘s attitute about me which I was careful for everything before I did.As an old saying"It is impossible taht everyone like you.Thus,even if I has done my best I also felt someone did't like me.The truth made me extremely upset and I am confused about it.One night,my mom was awared of my bad emotion and I have talked her my confuse.And she talked with me that I never do my best to make everyone like me because it was impossible.Since my mom's word,I alway do myself enjoy and my life is around with fruitful and happiness. As far as I am concerned,happiness is not difficult in our life.I cannot agree that "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them."only if we deal with the difficult can we to be happy.
