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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误。
Happiness is the most important thing to people.But life is not the same as opera show that someone always faced to variety problem.It is worst that problem usually made us upset."How to be happy in our life?"is the highlighted topics be talked about. When I was a child, a simple child, always wanted everyone to like me.So I taken good care of everyone before I did everything.As the saying goes, there's no way everyone likes you.Thus,even if I has done my best I also felt someone did't like me.The truth made me extremely upset and I am confused about it.One night,my mom realized my bad emotion and I have talked her my confused.And she talked with me that I never do my best to make everyone like me because it was impossible.Since my mom's word,I alway do something make me enjoy and my life is around with happiness. As far as I am concerned,happiness is no longer difficult.I cannot agree that "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them."Only if learn to deal with the problem can we obtain happiness
