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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Do not judge a person by appearance Nowadays, there is a wrong social ideological trend that more and more people prefer to pursuit to judge things by appearance.They judge the taste of food by its color, judge the comfort of a cloth by its pattern, moreover, they also judge a person by his look. It is high time to show how superficial and unwise to judge a person through this way. On the one hand, one’s ability is not always in direct proportion with his appearance. At present society, it is rare to find a person combined with wise and beauty. If we just choose a person depend on his outlook, we may regretfully find that we had lost some people with strong ability but got a person just have a beautiful shell. On the other hand, the superficial concept is not good for our society to development. Because people trend to care more about other’s appearance, it leads to the wrong concept that appearance is the most important part of a person, which may make our society become a superficial world. To sum up, we need to know that appearance is important but not the most important, however, a beautiful and substantial inherent is really what we can contact others.

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