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Happiness is the most important thing to people.But life is not the same as opera show that someone always faced a variety of problems.It is worst that problem usually made us upset.Among all the highlinghted topics,one is"How to be happy in our life?". When I was a child, a simple child, always wanted everyone to like me.So I taken good care of everyone before I did everything.As the saying goes, there's no way everyone likes you.Thus,even if I has did my best I also felt someone did't like me.The truth made me extremely upset and I am confused about it.One night,my mom realized my bad emotion and I have talked her my confused.And she talked with me that I never do my best to make everyone like me because it was impossible.Since my mom's word,I always do something make me enjoy and my life is around with happiness. As far as I am concerned,happiness is no longer difficult.I cannot agree that "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them."Only if I deal with the problem can we obtain happiness
