Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达较准确,高级词汇表达灵活;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
AS is shown in the chart,unemployment rate have increased accompanied with the rise of median weekly earning. It is noticeable that the picture tries to reveal a subtle meaning :education plays an important role in our life. There is no denying the fact that not only does it perform a dramatically desirable function in individuals in our personal life but in the society as a whole which is already crystal clear.