作者应适量增加从句的使用量;文章层次较为清晰;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Now,in the society,majority of people always treat a thing through what they saw or what they listened which is unwise to do. Some reasons fall to this phenomenon.First,with the development of media,we can know much from them,but,some of them are wanting to atrract people's attention,not the truth of the accident.It is unwise to jusity a thing by what we saw.Because what we saw just one part of the thing not the whole.For example,we saw the young always addited in net,and we could blam them,but,we did not know what help this problem is the boring of their life. In my opinion,we must justiy a thing through our brain not just rely on our eyes and eres.
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