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字数：300 满分：100分
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；采用了一些简单的从句；作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强，且注意拼写错误。
We are students not to make money,we spent the money that is come from out parants.So,we should economic,our parants make money are very hard. The main reason of my opinion is than my parants both are worker,my pather work in the place where temperature is 45 degrees in summer season.And my mother have to get up at 5:00 am every day.My parants both are 43 yers-old,but their seems to 55 yers-old.The second reason is that we should learn how to manage our money.That is because we graduate and work,we salary is not infinite,intead of limited. Personly,we should consider our parants' hard and our ability to manage the money.
