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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
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作者用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间,同时请检查文章的单词拼写;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。

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You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. It is a difficult choice for me to pick out only one from a high-paying job with long hours and a lower-paying job with shorter hours.As far as I am concerned,money has its significance.However nothing is more important than spending time with friends and family which is the source of the endless happiness.I have to addimit that money is the basis for living and the job is one way to gain money.But is there a normal standize for people to measure the income from low to high?Maybe five thousand yuan a month means quite a lot for some people however it means nothing to those rich ones.At this aspect,it is hard to say,especially for me,whether the payment is high or low because the suitable is always the better.So obviously there is no need to pursuit the highest income on the basis of sacrificing the time you can spend with your family and friendsBesides,no matter how much the money we earn or how much time we can spend accompanying with family members or friends,pursuiting the happiness and the love is the most meanful thing to everyone of us.If we can earn lots of money but have no chance to use them for travelling,camping with other people or even buying the house,the forniture for my parents,creating the romantic atmosphere to my lover,sending the best birthday presents to my children only to be occupied by your work and assignments and then what is the meaning of a high-paying job?I only get as much money as I want only to lose the opportunity to spend it with the people I wish to get together which is not the way I dream in my future.I am the one who prefer to spend as much time as possilbe with my family or friends.Because not only do I enjoy every moment I spend with them but also time is short in life.Just think about how many days you can spend with your family members and then you will learn what I acclaim.Job is just the method for us to earn money which is endless and can not all earned by you however the relationship between the you and the family is the thing that once disapper and will never come back.So I will chose to have a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give me more time with family and friends with no doubts just because I mentioned before,the pleasure comeing from your family and you is the chemistry of the source of the endless happiness Word

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