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字数：300 满分：100分
作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂，需要多使用一些高级词汇；文中衔接词丰富；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。
We are students not to make money,we spent the money from our parents.So,we should economic,our parents make money are very hard. The main reason of my opinion is than my parents both are worker,my father work in the place where temperature is 45 degrees in summer season.And my mother have to get up at 5:00 am every day.My parents both are 43 yers-old,but their seems to 55 yers-old.The second reason is that we should learn how to manage our money.That is because we graduate and work,we salary is not infinite,intead of limited. Personly,we should consider our parents' hard and our ability to manage the money.
