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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩。
We are students not to make money,we spent the money from our parents.So,we should be economic,our parents make money are very hard. The main reason of my opinion is than my parents both are worker,my father work in the place where temperature is 45 degrees in summer season.And my mother has to get up at 5:00 am every day.My parents both are 43 yers-old,but they seem to 55 yers-old.The second reason is that we should learn how to manage our money.That is because we graduate and work,we salary are not infinite,instead of limited. Personly,we should consider our parents' hard and our ability to manage the money.
