- 分享到:
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中衔接词丰富。
We are students not to make money,and we are spending our parents' money.So,we should be economic,our parents make money are very hard. The main reason of my opinion is than my parents both are worker,my father work in the place where temperature is 45 degrees in summer season.And my mother has to get up at 5:00 am every day.My parents both are 43 yers-old,but they seem to 55 yers-old.The second reason is that we should learn how to manage our money.Because we will graduate and work,our salary is not infinite,instead of limited. Personly,we should consider our parents' hard and our ability to manage the money.
