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I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Will you take a seat at the head of the table? It's an informal dinner, please don't stand on ceremony Afternoon,I and my frenid Zhang Wen,we speak in short article.we want to write a short article,about young love.I think we aren't should write it,but Zhang wen dosen't agree with me."Ok."I only can say it.