若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Will you take a seat at the head of the table? It's an informal dinner, please don't stand on ceremony In afternoon,I and my frenid Zhang Wen,we speak in short article.we want to write a short article,about young love.I don't think we should write it,but Zhang wen doesn't agree with me."Ok."I only can say it.