小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Her name is LiYuanxue and another surname is bitch which it is a lovely word to describ her . She is a cute person who always do something what we can not do .she is kind to me ,which often do someting for me surprisely .she always give me the best thing which is he favorite .on going shoping ,she always buy something i like it very much which have the high fat .Sometimes ,i want kill her when she could not difinite the instrutment which boil the water to have a bath .