文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Today is Moday.I don't like this one day.I always feel dizzy on Monday morning.I don't know why,and I hate to feel dizzy.I don't want to it. In afternoon,I and my friend Zhang Wen,we speak in short articles.we want to write the short articles,about young love.I don't think we should write it,but Zhang wen doesn't agree with me."All right."I only can say it.