2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend visit my hometown,I will recommend he or she to The Great Wall.Why? The main reason of my decision is that The Great Wall is ancient Chinese's pround.The Great Wall is a mystery none can solve,because The Great Wall is very grand,and then the ancient people how to build that without crane and other modern machine. The second reason is that The Great Wall have played a important role in ancient China.To visit The Great Wall help me introduce Chinese's history for my foreing friend. The Great Wall is a symbol of ancient Chinese's wisdom.