2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨。

If my foreign friend visit my hometown,I will recommend he or she to The Great Wall.Why? The main reason of my decision is that The Great Wall is ancient Chinese's pround.The Great Wall is a mystery none can solve,because The Great Wall is very grand,and then the ancient people how to build that without crane and other modern machine. The second reason is that The Great Wall have played an important role in ancient China.To visit The Great Wall help me introduce Chinese's history for my foreign friend. The Great Wall is a symbol of ancient Chinese's wisdom.