托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；可适当增加高级词汇的使用量；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

　　Between a high-paying job with long hours and a lower-paying job with shorter hours, I will definetely choose a high-paying job with long hours, although I might have little time to spend with my family and friends. 　　Firstly, money can help my dreams come true. I need a lot of money to do many things. For example, I want to buy a huge house with a garden and a swimming pool. I also want to have an expensive car. Maybe my relatives need my financial assistance. Especially, I hope my family can have a kind of comfortable life. My children can go to a famous private university to get excellent education. If I have no money, all of my dreams cannot come true. 　　In addition, to me, making a lot of money is a sign of success. I think that no one respects a poor man in today's society. From newspaper to television, almost all media focus on wealthy people instead of the poor. I cannot let the others consider me an incompetent man. 　　Of course, making this choice means that I have to pay a price. Perhaps, I cannot spent too much time with my family and friends. But I never regret my decision because I believe that both my family and my friends can understand me. For my family, I think they should know whom I do this for. For my friends, they will think how success I am and they will proud of me. 　　In conclusion, money is so important to me that I must choose a high-paying jod regardless of the consequences it will cause.