托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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When hunting jobs, most people are concerned about a lot of factors, such as payment and free time. Which is better, a lower-paying job with shorter hours and more vacation time or a high-paying job with long hours and less vacation? Different people would give different answers. I believe, answer is varying with different sections in life and can not restrict to a stereotype. When just graduating from university, I would like to try to get a well-paid job with long hours and less vacation for my first job because of two mainly reasons. Firstly, as a graduate, I am eager to put my knowledge learned from text books into practice. Long hours work causes me to work hard. In the competition environment, it is easy for me to be inspired not only in good idea but also new method for the efficiency to improve in work. After a period of long hours work, I surely acquired rich experience and skills on work which is good at benefiting my future career. Secondly, well-paid job makes sure that I can make it better for my family’s living standard. That is to say my family would live comfortably. Well, after getting married and depositing a sum of money, I will hunt a low-paying job with shorter hours and more vacation time. Specifically speaking, there are two aspects. For the most, after marriage, my family is more important than my career. It is more important for most people, after marriage, to take care of their families than to do job. I would spend a majority of time in living with my family, educating my children and playing with them, communicating my husband and taking good care of my parents as well. Secondly, during much vacation time I would relax myself and do some sporting to keep younger physically healthy. A research shows that more and more diseases become young staff under stress from work and life. For example, quite a few young people have a trouble made in high blood pressure attack which is an illness of the old. In conclusion, people should get different kinds of job depends on different sections in life.