托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；作者词汇基本功很好，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用。

　　I am optimistic that through my studies and continued hard work I will be able to find a job that will provide　my future family and me with financial security. We should be able to afford the necessities of life, such as a modest　home, enough food to nourish us and keep us in good health, as well as education for our children. 　　Hopefully, I will　find myself in the fortunate situation where I can decide between a high-paying job with long hours and a　lower-paying job with shorter hours. I would choose the job with the lower salary and greater personal time without　hesitation, because my family and friends are the most important things in my life. 　　Time is the greatest investment I can make into the relationships with my wife and my children. A marriage is　not just a decision one makes but a promise that one keeps. In order to do so one has to be there for the other person　and share moments of joy as well as times of difficulty. Nowadays, too many relationships wither away as the　partners are unable to work out their problems or bond through meaningful experiences. Personal careers become too important and family time becomes a rare occurrence.The absence of one parent, due to professional career or divorce, can have a very negative effect on a child's　development. The child might question his value to father or mother (depending on which one is continually　absent) and develop low self-esteem. Without the presence of either or, worse, both parents, the child will be morelikely to make bad decisions as he is lacking proper guidance. And there is one point should also be mentioned, i.e.neither expensive toys nor fancy clothes can compensate for this. 　　Lastly, I can derive more pleasure from spending time with my friends than I ever could from driving a sports　car or taking luxury vacations. The inner peace and balance that I enjoy from their company are nvaluable to me.Also, a million dollars in the bank would be worth nothing if I didn't have the time to enjoy these riches with my　friends.