英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71659
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
评语:

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

If foreign friend of mine visit my hometown,I will recommend he or she to The Great Wall.Why? The main reason of my decision is that The Great Wall is ancient Chinese pround.The Great Wall is a mystery none can solve,because The Great Wall is very grand,and then the ancient people how to build that without crane and other modern machine,only depend on the power of people and cattle. The second reason is that The Great Wall has played an important role in ancient China. Visiting The Great Wall help to introduce Chinese history for foreign friend of mine. The Great Wall is a symbol of ancient Chinese wisdom.

会员评论0个评论)
qinzhenbo
金币:59

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:91.0coco99400

人气:86发布:2016-12-22

得分:88.5aixuexi1234

人气:28发布:2016-06-06

得分:88.5shymsky

人气:44发布:2016-11-16

得分:88.0Chrisinny

人气:78发布:2014-10-09

得分:88.02011213045

人气:75发布:2015-04-21