文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Today is Moday.I don't like this one day.I always feel dizzy on Monday morning.I don't know why,and I hate to feel dizzy.I don't want to it. In the afternoon,I and my friend Zhang Wen,we speak in short articles.we want to write a short article,about young love.I don't think we should write it,but Zhang wen doesn't agree with me."All right."I only can say it. My mother eats food with chopsticks.