文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Today is Moday.I don't like this one day.I always feel dizzy on Monday morning.I don't know why,and I hate to feel dizzy.I don't want to it. In the afternoon,I and my friend Zhang Wen,we speak in short articles.we want to write a short article,about young love.I don't think we should write it,but Zhang wen doesn't agree with me."All right."I only can say it. My mother eats food with chopsticks.I eat with chopsticks too.My father and my grandma,they eat food with chopsticks too.my family all people eat with chopsticks.In China,we always eat meals with chopsticks.