但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
Today is Moday.I don't like this one day.I always feel dizzy on Monday morning.I don't know why,and I hate to feel dizzy.I don't want to it. In the afternoon,I and my friend Zhang Wen,we speak in short articles.we want to write a short article,about young love.I don't think we should write it,but Zhang wen doesn't agree with me."All right."I only can say it. My mother eats food with chopsticks.I eat with chopsticks too.My father and my grandma use chopsticks too.my family all people eat with chopsticks.In China,we always eat with chopsticks.Chines eat meals with special tools,and It's chopsticks. Chopsticks isn't like fork and knifes.