句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
It is unwise to make conclusion after you listening or seeing something We usually get informations by listening or seeing and then we will make conclusions by the informations we get.However,what you see or listen maybe mislead you. Just as the saying goes"think before you leap".Before we make conclusions,we would better to get as more information as we can,it will help us make a corret decision.What's more,we should think more than we can see and make decisions by our brain not by our eyes.Many of times,the truth not what we see. Take me for example,once my classmate told me that my best friend said she dislike me because I always do better in study.After I listen it,I felt so amazed,the frist thing I wanted to do is asking her why.Luckly,she was not in the classroom.Some hour later,I had clamed down.We were so important to each other,I should believe in her,I should know her by my heart not my ears or eyes.Some days later,I got that the classmate had argued with my friend and she wanted to hurt her by me.I just feel so luck she was not in the classroom at that time till now. Think before you leap.Not make conclusions at once after you listening or seeing something,sometimes it not ture.Think more can help you make corret decision.
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