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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71617
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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My foreign friend said she will coming my hometown, I fell surprise,then I am think which interseting place I can take she see and play?My hometown is a beautiful play, I must let she like my hometown.So,this is a easy and difficult thing.First I will taking she in our centre city,The 8.1 Square,It is very big and beautiful,We can flying the kite,and taking photoes,and looking the fountain at the night.I think she will love my hometown.

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