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My foreign friend said she will coming my hometown, I fell surprise,then I am think which interseting place I can take she see and play?My hometown is a beautiful play, I must let she like my hometown.So,this is a easy and difficult thing.First I will taking she in our centre city,The 8.1 Square,It is very big and beautiful,We can flying the kite,and taking photoes,and looking the fountain at the night.I think she will love my hometown.