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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
I am a fresher in my campus. So when I came there at the beginning, I took part in a lot of campus activities. But the service in restaurant has benefited me most. It was an activity which launched by my class. All of students joined it positively. In this activity, we helped waitresses to clean up tables, threw out the rest of food and wash chopsticks. When I worked, I did not feel tired instead I like it and feel energetic .Through this activity, I experienced the restaurant workers'life and learned about their dillengence. Now I take care of the cleaning if restaurant in order to decrease their work. I think this activity is very meaningful and it has benefited me most.
