2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

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In my mind, the good relationship between teachers and students is like this ,students and teaches will chat with each other and don't need to worry about mistakes, teachers will help students not only in study but also in life,if there has a problem ,teachers will encourage students themselves to explore and solve it. I have some tips to bulided this king of relationships. First of all,teachers should not blame students when they make mistakes ,then ,teachers should lift limits to let students to solve it themselves.