2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I would like to introduce the resort which is the Great Wall.As one of the wonder in the world,the Great Wall attacted many travelers every year.The reason why I recommend it are as follow. To begin with.the Great Wall is located in the capital of China and more and more people from all over the world want to visit it.Furthmore,there is a going says:a men who does not reach the Great Wall is not real men.In light of this,the emtion of visiting the Great Wall is strongely.Last but not least,the Great Wall has a long histroy and to be a symbol of China. By and large,the Great Wall is most wonderful intreat in China.It is worthwhile visiting it and I hope I can go to visit it one day.