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It is generally acknowledged that nothing succeeds without a strong will a strong will is the key to achieve one's dream great revolutionary can't be succeded without people who have strong will for us students it is same we won't become great people if we dont push ourselves to study hard There was a time when i looked down on study regardless of studying i took living a relax life in school for granted as a result i failed all the test while others got good grades from then on i realized that studying hard could not only bring me great marks but also others' reward it is from that time that i study hard to promote myself so that i can be admitted into a langue university today i seems sill remember the day when i read book day and night for me now i have recognized the meaning of a strong will a strong will is just like raining which can water flowers a strong will is just like boat to resisit thunderstorms ,which leads us to be powerful .
