2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；文章衔接手法恰当；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。

I would like to introduce the resort which is the Great Wall.As one of the wonders in the world,the Great Wall attracted many travelers every year.The reasons why I recommend it are as follows. To begin with,the Great Wall is located in the capital of China and more and more people from all over the world want to visit it.Furthmore,as the saying goes:the men who not reach the Great Wall is not real men.In light of this,the emotion of visiting the Great Wall is strongly.Last but not least,the Great Wall has a long history and to be a symbol of China. By and large,the Great Wall is most wonderful places of interest in China.It is worthwhile visiting it and I hope I can go to visit it one day.