2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

I would like to introduce the resort which is the Great Wall.As one of the wonders in the world,the Great Wall attracted many travelers every year.The reasons why I recommend it are as follows. To begin with,the Great Wall is located in the capital of China and more and more people from all over the world want to visit it.Furthmore,as the saying goes:the men who not reaches the Great Wall is not real men.In light of this,the emotion of visiting the Great Wall is strong.Last but not least,the Great Wall not only has a long history but also be a symbol of China. By and large,the Great Wall is the most wonderful places of interest in China.It is worthwhile visiting it and I hope I can go to visit it one day.