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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10402
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中衔接词丰富。

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It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,that is to say,we should always have plan B.We never know what will happen,so we should prepare more for future. There are so many choices in the world,and we have more choices too.Don't put all you eggs in one basket.You never know if your basket is enough strong to carry your eggs,if it can't carry all,you will lose all you have. For example,once I had a speech competition when I in high school,and everybody should prepare their own paper.My teacher gave me some choices and told me to prepare more than one.In that day,I'm the last one to do the speech and I had prepared two topics for it.I can never image that the pupil before me used one of the topics I prepared!Finally I got the first in the speech.I felt so thankful to my teacher because without her I can't win this competition. It is important to have two or more "baskets" to put your "eggs",it can help you do better in you life.Preparing more and always making sure that you have other way to go.Having more choices can help you to be a confident person.

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