2013年4月6日雅思大作文真题TASK2

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中词汇使用灵活，也能较准确地使用高级词汇。

With the increasingly rapid development of information technology and the resplendent progress of scientific knowledge that people have made in last hundreds of years,it is not grandiloquent to say that people are experiencing an unparalleled era in the long river of human civilization.Indeed,so astronomical achievements people have done,human being has utilized the seemingly endless wisdom and explored almost every field that people could find.But there are still some experts who are doubtful about the future possibility of progressive scientific advance because every subject seems to have been exhausted after the third industrial revolution where numerous basic knowledge has been found and the main structure of many scientific subjects has been established.Personally thinking,although awesome people have realized countless dreams which have attracted ancient residents for thousands of years,current people and future citizens still have abundant opportunities to explore untapped fields. As for the fields where people have made immense achievements,they can include almost all subjects which can be learned in universities and colleges.Firstly,natural science has provided more accurate perspective to explain the outer space,the world which we live in and the inner framework which is hiden in the atom.For instance,prestigious scientists,such as Newton and Albert Einstein,respectively built the analysis of movements in the earth and in the universe.Secondly,social science,including economics,politics,history and anthropology,etc.,offered latent solution to our society which incessantly confronted with crime,corruption,democratic request,financial crisis and so on.For instance,Adam Smith,the great pioneer in economics,publicized his tame to elucidate the market system,thus making market economy unquestionably the optimal model for any country which intents to achieve economic growth and social reform. However,just because people have been successful to cope with problems in the past does not mean the impossibility of future fulfillment in all areas of human life.On one hand,existing subjects still should be explored by unstoppable efforts.For example,in spite of the splendid theory created by Howkin,the auther of a famous scientific book and also the founder of the black hole theory,people cannot completely comprehend black hole's cause,effect and its role in our universe.On the other hand,there are many virginal areas waiting for cultivation and utilization.For instance,the riveting relationship between astronomics and religion are alluring many scientists and philosophers. Conclusively,people have erected many bars in the palace of achievements.And it is the fundamental work which our ancestors have done,that makes our following progress possible.So in a word,standing upon the shoulder of giants,human can see further path and bigger world.