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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3528
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可增加从句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

i think one should not stopping learning just because he is a little order. As we known the word is changing.the acknowledge we learned yesterday may be not useful in today.So in order to living we need to study new things,learn new skills to keep us capable for the word. one of my neighbour he is 40.recently he had lost his job.because the new graduated students have more energy more skill and ask for lower salary.after lose his job he had to take participate in an career advise course.after a fewer months learn he find a new job now. so in my opionon ever you move first or the fate will caught you!it is never to late to getting a degree or learn a new skill.

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