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这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,高级词汇的希望能更熟练一些连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Resume Name:Li Ming Sex:male Date of birth:6,15,1986 Marital status:single Job objective: English trade clerk Education background:graduated from Beifang univesity in July,2008 Personal skills: have a fluently English writing and speaking and every subjects are well. can speak basic Garmany,and well-known trading. Hobbies: like to play volleyball, singing and dancing. that my honor to be one of your empoyers