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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10402
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

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As is vividly described in a proverb,it is unwise to put all egg in one basket.We will face a number of troubles and challenges in our life,and we can't solve them at a same time,we need to learn how to separate them into little questions,and we will feel easy to make it by this way. Why we say it is unwise to put all egg in one basket,there are three reasons.Firstly,it is obvious that if we make all the egg in one basket they will be break down easily.In another word,We can not solve a large problem at once.Because we will not have little process.Secondly,if we want to find a way to resolute a big problem.We must be affaired of it,and lost confidence to solve it.Lastly,if we cut it into small part,it is said that, we use several baskets to set eggs.It will be hardly breaken down. To sum up,We must learn to make a big problem to be several little problems,Only by this,we can get a best meansure to make it.Therefore,it is unwise to put all eggs in a basket,we should put it in several baskets.

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